Dalton's Writing.

The large wings make it soar freely in the air, the propellers make it go faster and roar. The elevators on the back of the plane help the plane go up and down. The windows let the passengers see the great view which means they can see the houses we they go up. The pilots have to see where they are going. The gear/wheels let it land and takeoff properly.

The plane flies through the big white cotton ball’s as though it was a bird.

My buddy, Dalton aged 7, and I have created a descriptive piece of writing. Based on the picture he chose.